It is a fact that consumers are forced to see many adverts in this material world. In my opinion, this can be dangerous as people tend to buy unwanted products without thinking, in particular, young people. Many measures can be taken to control advertisements.
Firstly advertisements have become ubiquitous. TV and internet advertisements highly influence people to buy unwanted products.Especially young people will be more attracted to advertisements. Even though, there is no use of the product companies are influencing people using film actors, this is how young adults get addicted to a specific product, and people just buy products as part of their intimacy to heroes. For example, at the time of football or cricket match sponsors advertise their brands, we cannot be escaped.
A practical solution is not an easy thing now. However, the government could control the advertisement of alcohol and tobacco products. But, they do not have the power to control adverts of all other products. The only one thing can be done is using common sense, and identify the real use of a product before purchase. Moreover, Parents should educate their children about advertisements that they are the marketing tricks of a product and that may not be worthwhile as it shows.
In conclusion, although total control of advertisements are not possible the government can take some steps to stop adverting some of the harmful products. Analyzing a product necessity will help people to get out of the trap of advertisements.
- In order to study at the university students are required to pay expensive tuition fees Not all students can afford them so some people think that university education should be free to everyone To what extend do you agree Give reasons for your answer and 76
- You have been invited to attend an interview for a place studying a course in a college. Unfortunately because of a previous appointment you cannot come at the time they wish.Write a letter to the admissions tutor and explain your position. Apologise and 56
- Many museums charge for admission while others are free.Do you think the advantages of charging people for admission to museums outweigh the disadvantages? 73
- Because of the negative effects on health of an inactive lifestyle all university students and school children should be forced to do sports activities at least 3 times per week Do you agree 84
- Letter 11
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 128, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Especially
...fluence people to buy unwanted products.Especially young people will be more attracted to ...
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Line 7, column 127, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...t can take some steps to stop adverting some of the harmful products. Analyzing a product n...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, may, moreover, so, while, for example, in conclusion, in particular, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1278.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 246.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19512195122 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13434405121 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.581300813008 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 395.1 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.4797454024 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.2857142857 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5714285714 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.28571428571 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156444395218 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0598330854092 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0418046718167 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0954955919593 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0276061886751 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.58 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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