Too much attention is paid to and too much money is spent on keeping pets, while people throughout the world are starving
Discuss the arguments for and again keeping pets
To what extent do you agree?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowlege or experience
it is often argued that taking care of pets is a waste of money and time. Moreover, when people are starving to death all around the globe. I completely disagree with this opinion and think pets are essential for being productive in society and happy.
First of all, I believe that everything can't be measured by the money it costs or by the material value that it has. And being a pet owner is definitely one of those situations in life that can't be judged by someone who hasn't had been one. For example, the calming and grateful feeling that you experience when your pet came to welcome you at your arrival at home it is exceptional. that's why the emotional benefits of having a pet are out of question.
Secondly, nowadays in this 21st-century society mental illness are a growing problem and having a pet is a good way to find out the balance. it provides a stable routine that helps out to organize and reduce stress and depression problems related. For instance, waking up early to walk your pet, not only will improve your health because of doing some morning exercise but also will improve your focus during the day.
Thirdly, if we take a look at how wealth is distributed over the world and in our country, most of the world's wealth is managed by only a few companies or individuals. So, little can be done by us to modify the situation in developing countries. Furthermore, the impact in the gross domestic product made by pets is insignificant compared with other entertainment industries, such as cinema, videogames or TV. Thus, keeping an animal at home is expensive, it is of little or none impact to the global economy, and won't make a difference.
To conclude, I strongly believe that the emotional benefits produced by pets outweigh the drawback of its expensive maintenance.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, thus, for example, for instance, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1493.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 315.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.73968253968 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69759091128 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.603174603175 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 479.7 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.0975072403 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.5333333333 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.53333333333 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0928282920838 0.244688304435 38% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0265277674454 0.084324248473 31% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.032712123124 0.0667982634062 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0452059219848 0.151304729494 30% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0245341106315 0.056905535591 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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