Some people think universities should provide knowledge and skills related to a future career; other think the true function of a university is to give access to knowledge for its own sake. What is your opinion of the main function of a university?
Nowadays, an increasing number of people are concerned about the purpose that university education serves. However, whether universities should mainly provide job-related skills or pure knowledge to graduates has caused heated debate. I agree with the view that job-related knowledge and skills should be the main concern of universities.
It is obvious that the main focus of receiving a university education is to provide students with practical knowledge and skills which enable them to become well-qualified employees in the job market. which means this tendency will become the most welcomed subjects among the majority of students will select. so, universities, as service providers, have to accommodate the demand of customers.
Meanwhile, those who harbor the view that the main function of universities should be to give access to the knowledge believe that theoretical knowledge is the foundation of any practical skill. Indeed, there are students who interested in knowledge for its own sake, and they will later become scientists and scholars who will make greater contributions to our society. But still, the cons are far better.
In conclusion, the major function of universities should be providing most students with job-related skills, guaranteeing a high rate of employment and thus making the society function well. Meanwhile, we should not underestimate the other important roles universities are undertaking. Only by doing so can universities maintain dynamic and sustainable development.
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Suggestion: focus
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Suggestion: Which
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Message: “which” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
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Suggestion: So
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, still, thus, well, while, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1298.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 227.0 315.596192385 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.71806167401 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88156143495 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11057515159 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.607929515419 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 396.9 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.9124384496 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.166666667 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9166666667 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.08333333333 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.378475728592 0.244688304435 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129343996625 0.084324248473 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0973705787122 0.0667982634062 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.225777161659 0.151304729494 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0727369100478 0.056905535591 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.9 12.4159519038 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.05 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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