The agree with the statement that the adults must make important decisions for their older teenage children, but this depends on the situation they are in. on the basis of certain factors like education, personal and social life, I present here my perspective views in the following passage.
The most significant point that needs to be considered in this conversation is education. As every one knows, education plays a vital role in a person's life. No one casts doubts about this. When children grew up, and they are in the stage to decide their major course in their college education, the parents or the older adult should involve in the decision. To illustrate, after completing my higher secondary, I was confused to select my college degree and was tentative about the course i choose. In that situation, my father and my brother took a decision and navigated me through science degree. Being known about my educational background and strong foundation in science, my parents took a wise decision, which helped me to enhance my knowledge in science.
Personally, children in their teenage are unreliable. They do not know what is right and what is wrong. Though, they spent 12 years in the school environment, but they do not have the experience in outside world. For example, my cousin was not interested in the studies and he wanted to work instead of going to school. Most of the people, who were around him, did not support his decision, and they convinced him to continue his studies. Even though, he earn now, but he might have earned more when he paid attention for the decision made by the older adults. They are experienced ones in life than the teenage children, who lack experience.
Additionally, the liberal of making important decision for their children life suits to a certain point. Most of the people agree that their children should not rely on them for everything. They wish their children to be independent and lead life without them in the worse cases or in an emergencies. For instance, one of my friend who was addicted to illegal drug and alcohol without the knowing of his parents. He made a significant decision at that time which changed his life happy eventually. This is the proof that sometimes, it is acceptable for teenage to make decisions themselves.
To sum it up, with all these evidences from the passage, parents makes wise decisions for their teenage children, but sometimes it is also good to make decisions themselves based on the situations.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, second, so, for example, for instance, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 60.0 43.0788530466 139% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 59.0 52.1666666667 113% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.0752688172 223% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2080.0 1977.66487455 105% => OK
No of words: 424.0 407.700716846 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90566037736 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53775939005 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67879680009 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 223.0 212.727598566 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.525943396226 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 641.7 618.680645161 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.279330245 48.9658058833 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.4347826087 100.406767564 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4347826087 20.6045352989 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.65217391304 5.45110844103 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.5376344086 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251723470696 0.236089414692 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0779457374907 0.076458572812 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0883392160336 0.0737576698707 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169195083072 0.150856017488 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0689308900479 0.0645574589148 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.66 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 86.8835125448 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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