The plans below show the layout of a university's sports centre now, and how it will look after redevelopment.
Summarise the Information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons whee relevant.
The plans give information about how the sports center of a university looks at present and the way it will look in the future after the renovation.
Overall, lots of new facilities will be added to the sports center and there will be changes in the services that now exist.
The sports center of the university at present has only a pool, a gym,changing rooms,a seating area and a reception, however the layout of the sports center in the future has many new services.In the west side outside the center, the outdoor cards will be updated to a sizable pool and right in front of it a changing room will be added as well as a sports shop right next to the changing room.
The gym will remain in the same place but it will be extended,next to the seats, a sports hall will be constructed and on the right side of it two new dance studios.A brand new addition to the center it will be a café which will be located right next to the entrance and changing room.
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- The number of people being sent to prison is increasing year on year While some people believe prisons are the best way to tackle crime others suggest that community service is successful Discuss both views and give your own opinion 86
- Popular events like the football world cup and other international sporting occasions are essential in easing international tensions and releasing patriotic emotions in a safe way To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion 84
- Many students have to study subjects which they do not like. Some people think this is a complete waste of time. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? 56
- The plans below show the layout of a university's sports centre now, and how it will look after redevelopment.Summarise the Information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons whee relevant. 61
- All cars that burn fossil fuels should be banned and electric should replace them.Do you agree or disagree? 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 70, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , changing
...ersity at present has only a pool, a gym,changing rooms,a seating area and a reception, h...
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Line 5, column 85, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , a
...nt has only a pool, a gym,changing rooms,a seating area and a reception, however t...
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Line 5, column 194, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: In
...ter in the future has many new services.In the west side outside the center, the o...
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Line 7, column 45, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...gym will remain in the same place but it will be extended,next to the seats, a sp...
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Line 7, column 63, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , next
... the same place but it will be extended,next to the seats, a sports hall will be con...
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Line 7, column 85, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
... will be extended,next to the seats, a sports hall will be constructed and on the ri...
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Line 7, column 116, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...seats, a sports hall will be constructed and on the right side of it two new danc...
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Line 7, column 168, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: A
... right side of it two new dance studios.A brand new addition to the center it wil...
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Line 7, column 226, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...on to the center it will be a café which will be located right next to the entran...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, look, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 1.00243902439 998% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 790.0 965.302439024 82% => OK
No of words: 180.0 196.424390244 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.38888888889 4.92477711251 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66284150148 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42965221308 2.65546596893 91% => OK
Unique words: 85.0 106.607317073 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.472222222222 0.547539520022 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 237.6 283.868780488 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 8.94146341463 45% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 45.0 22.4926829268 200% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 109.57959436 43.030603864 255% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 197.5 112.824112599 175% => OK
Words per sentence: 45.0 22.9334400587 196% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 5.23603664747 172% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 1.69756097561 530% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168019155029 0.215688989381 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.138735711747 0.103423049105 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0799277539242 0.0843802449381 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138735711747 0.15604864568 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0799277539242 0.0819641961636 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.7 13.2329268293 164% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 61.2550243902 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.3 10.3012195122 168% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.07 11.4140731707 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 40.7170731707 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 11.4329268293 166% => OK
gunning_fog: 20.0 10.9970731707 182% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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