The map below shows the development of the village of Ryemouth between 1995 and present. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Submitted by shenu on Tue, 05/14/2019 - 08:43

The rendered two maps delineate the acquaintance with regard to the distinct sorts of alternation in the Ryemouth village from 1995 to today era.

Overall, it is worthy enough to point out that the large number of houses are built in present scenario ,whereas others basic facilities are also available as compared to past such as golf , car park.

To embark with, there are numerous changes that can be seen after making progress. First and foremost , in the northeast side, there are almost eight accommodation on the both side of road in 1995 , but with passage of time, city planners has constructed more houses to reside. Along with, during the current time period ,the new amenities are established such as golf which is set up at the corner of the east and apart from that. the area of this golf are extended to make tennis court by replacing farmland. Subsequently, A noticeable view may be observed that in the above same side, the area of forest park was totally removed.

Furthermore, there are two lanes that divided this village into three parts.Total five outlets were made in 1995 to the left side of road , although the name of this five blocks has renamed as restaurants.At the opposite side of shop, the fish market has been transformed into apartments without changing position. Also, the buiLdings of cafe as well as hotel did not lose the importance after the renovation of this village. In the south side of this map, during 1995, there was a fishing port in the middle of sea ,while after 1995, it is replaced.

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Average: 7.8 (1 vote)
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IELTS Writing Task I - IELTS Academic

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 104, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... of houses are built in present scenario ,whereas others basic facilities are also...
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Line 3, column 189, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ailable as compared to past such as golf , car park. To embark with, there are ...
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Line 5, column 102, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...fter making progress. First and foremost , in the northeast side, there are almost...
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Line 5, column 197, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...odation on the both side of road in 1995 , but with passage of time, city planners...
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Line 5, column 321, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ong with, during the current time period ,the new amenities are established such a...
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Line 5, column 433, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
...corner of the east and apart from that. the area of this golf are extended to make ...
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Line 7, column 77, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Total
...t divided this village into three parts.Total five outlets were made in 1995 to the l...
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Line 7, column 138, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...re made in 1995 to the left side of road , although the name of this five blocks h...
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Line 7, column 206, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: At
... five blocks has renamed as restaurants.At the opposite side of shop, the fish mar...
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Line 7, column 516, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... was a fishing port in the middle of sea ,while after 1995, it is replaced.
^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, may, so, well, whereas, while, apart from, as to, such as, as well as, with regard to

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 7.0 229% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 5.60731707317 214% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 33.7804878049 157% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1277.0 965.302439024 132% => OK
No of words: 266.0 196.424390244 135% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8007518797 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 3.73543355544 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53688564025 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 106.607317073 156% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.624060150376 0.547539520022 114% => OK
syllable_count: 395.1 283.868780488 139% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.5183433348 43.030603864 155% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.7 112.824112599 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.6 22.9334400587 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.6 5.23603664747 222% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 1.69756097561 589% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0955603552929 0.215688989381 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0389175939902 0.103423049105 38% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0405562148431 0.0843802449381 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0639638345167 0.15604864568 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0411450105902 0.0819641961636 50% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.2329268293 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 61.2550243902 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.3012195122 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.86 11.4140731707 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.06136585366 108% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 40.7170731707 157% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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