Dear Priya,
I wanted to thank you for the wonderful gift you have sent me on my birthday. I really appreciate the thoughtfulness of your gift.
I was always an avid reader from my childhood and my home now looks like a library because of the number of books I have read. I was had the thought of moving from hardcover books to e-books, and your gift of e-book reader, Kindle, was exactly what I had planned to buy.
I did receive few other gifts from my friends, some of which are electronic gadgets, which although is useful in my life, but not as important as my books. It was surprising to get a call from few of my old school friends on my birthday, and we actually had a get-together on that day and had a lot of fun, obviously your presence was missed.
I hope to meet you soon.
Thanks,
Vatsa
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ate the thoughtfulness of your gift. I was always an avid reader from my child...
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Line 5, column 128, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...use of the number of books I have read. I was had the thought of moving from hard...
^
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...s exactly what I had planned to buy. I did receive few other gifts from my fri...
^
Line 12, column 6, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hope to meet you soon. Thanks, Vatsa
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, if, look, really, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 665.0 937.175257732 71% => OK
No of words: 153.0 206.0 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.34640522876 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51700396316 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50583496091 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 127.690721649 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.633986928105 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 194.4 290.88556701 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 59.6636405192 44.8134815571 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.0 76.5299724578 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8571428571 16.8248392259 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 4.34317383033 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168347429539 0.216113520407 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0820395859888 0.0766984524023 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0619673024481 0.0603063233224 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129492359499 0.12726935374 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0762507202847 0.0580467560999 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 8.37731958763 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 75.54 70.7449484536 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.95 8.71597938144 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.05 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 23.0 41.2886597938 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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