In recent years, many small local shops have closed because customers travel to large shopping centres or mall to do shopping.
Is this a positive or negative development?
There is no doubt that the mall culture has expanded as much as it was never before. Impact of such phenomenon on the small scale vendors is soaring concern now. This essay will delve in to positive and negative effects of it and followed by opinion.
On the one hand, such expansion of mall culture has allowed buyers to have one point destination for all of their needs and success of such malls demonstrate the customer's high preferences. However, this inclination of buyers towards these malls left local vendors in trouble. This is because mall owners gives best price, or lower price than a retail market to attract the buyers, and buyer's preference is always towards the saving money which will eventually reduces the customer base of local vendors and they loose the business. Eventually the it would become difficult for a local vendor to support financially to their family. To illustrate this, a survey results of INDIA has shown that due to mall culture more than 20% reduction in the retail customer base.
On the other hand, these big shopping centers gives ample varieties of products to choose from, best ambiance, helping staff member to assist the customers such facilities attracts the more buyers and their sells will increase. Such good sells will allow such mall owners to create more jobs by opening their successive mall in other part of city or province. In recent time to promote the local goods the mall owns also showcase the local items to their customers and they also buy those items. For an instance, in Udaipur many mall showcase handy crafted work of native in their premises and allowed earning to local vendors as well.
To sum up, this mall culture has both positive and negative impact but positive aspects curbs the demerits. I firmly belie in such culture should be promoted.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, well, no doubt, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1515.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88709677419 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.32370268596 2.80592935109 83% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.551612903226 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 468.0 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.9582733056 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.214285714 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1428571429 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.14285714286 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224856954191 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0776029758138 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0427078976678 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13194027309 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0159779969706 0.056905535591 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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