many people in society believe that having fixed punishments for all crimes is a more efficient way of dealing with criminals in the justice system.
what are the advantages and disadvantages of having a fixed punishments.
It has been argued that setting a predefined set of punishments for all the criminal activities would help justice system to deal with criminals in a better way. However, this trend would have its own pros and cons. In this essay I will discuss the advantages such as fast judgements and disadvantage like increased crime rate.
The major advantage of this judicial system will be prompt and quick announcements of punishments. As in most of the countries around the world, the judicial system is so slow like any criminal case is pending for many years. For an instance ‘Nirbhaya rape case’ of India was the most heinous crime noted there, it had been into trials from last seven years. Still the culprits are alive while the victim lost her life after struggling for ten days.
Another major advantage of this fixed punishment system would be that there would be no biasing. Nowadays, it is very common to see that spectrum of punishment is completely different for a powerful person as compared to a general public. For an instance A very famous Bollywood star was found guilty for hunting deer and rash driving leading to death of four poor laborers. But his power in terms of money, popularity made him free of guilty and no punishment was announced against him. If the same crime was commited by a common man, he would be behind the bars long time ago.
However, this trend of fixed punishments also has some negative aspects. The primary drawback of this system would be avoiding the circumstances. For example, if the crime has been committed under pressure, unintentionally or in a planned way, all these things not considered could encourage criminals as they knew that punishment will be same and fixed.
In conclusion, having a fixed punishment for all sorts of crimes will definitely benefit the judicial system in a way of quick response and unbiased judgements. On the other hand, may provoke criminals and may increase the rate of crime.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 370, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Still,
...been into trials from last seven years. Still the culprits are alive while the victim...
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Line 3, column 224, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
... for a powerful person as compared to a general public. For an instance A very famous Bollywoo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, still, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1636.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 334.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89820359281 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69408511173 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.589820359281 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 505.8 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.878036603 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.2352941176 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6470588235 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.94117647059 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 15.0 3.9879759519 376% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.314937380151 0.244688304435 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0932012724729 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0746190905132 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.185599488964 0.151304729494 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0679984624461 0.056905535591 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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