Some people believe that the only purpose of films is to entertain. Others say films should have educational value. Discuss both view and give your opinion.
It is widely argued that watching films to relax. While some individuals said that films should include life lessons. Personally, I think it would be better to have educational value.
In the one hand, films play an indispensable role in reducing stress after stressful day because of its entertainment. For a long period ago, people established numerous tools in order to make them amusing, including films. It was a variety of kind such as comedy, romantic or fiction, but it created happiness for watchers. According to statistics from scientists, a film could evaluate their tiredness definitely, thus people should live 4 times longer than usual. For example, my sister always goes to the cinema when she feels exhausted about her job. She said that films temporarily forget pressure, even it build a chance to amuse with friends.
In the other hand, I strongly believe that films should have educational value based on two major methods. One method is that films could bring sentimental value for watchers. Currently, entertainment aspect is developing day after day, hence actors no longer employ only sense of humor, they combine with significant value in order to educate people. For instance, a famous film called “Titanic” wins a prize at Oscar because of mental lessons that it brings for people. Thus, it accelerates motivation in order that they could fulfill passions. Even films made watcher crying due to profound value that it expressed. Another method is that films could assist people learning languages. For instance, Nguyen Le Tram – a girl knocking out competitors since she had a wonderful English skill thank for watching film every day.
In conclusion, I assume that a film need to combination between entertainment and educational.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ly argued that watching films to relax. While some individuals said that films should...
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Message: Did you mean 'builds'?
Suggestion: builds
...ms temporarily forget pressure, even it build a chance to amuse with friends. In th...
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Line 4, column 95, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... between entertainment and educational.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, so, thus, while, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1491.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23157894737 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87408047308 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.659649122807 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 453.6 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.1464626628 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.8333333333 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8333333333 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.05555555556 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.263932167078 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0844838775713 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0652618873644 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17068468176 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0553023478884 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.