The chart and table shows the number of fissures in million for different region between 1970 1980 and 2000 and the word tops 10 exporter of fish in 2000

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The chart and table shows the number of fissures in million for different region between 1970 1980 and 2000 and the word tops 10 exporter of fish in 2000

TheProvided bar graph compares the count of fishers for given five continents in three year whereas the table we present the list of 10 countries leading in the export business of fishes

Overall it can be seen that Asia dominated in the number of fishermen in all the given year on the other hand Thailand stood at top position among to 10 countries in exporting fishes

Asia’s to data highest position in fishers number counted as 24 million in 2000 the fishermen in 1970 and 2000 was above the 1 million in Africa and North America South America followed the study part in three-year which was noticed near to 1,000,000 .2 million fishers were accounted in Africa in the year 1980 and 2000 last three or four was the least in the number of issues that was below the 1 million in same year

Moving toward the exporters of fish in 2000 Fiander and at first position and followed by Norway and USA China to 4th place while Denmark was at fifth position and Canada was at sixth position to complete the league rest of country’s was Taiwan Russia Indonesia closed by South Korea

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 52, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... bar graph compares the count of fishers for given five continents in three year ...
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Line 3, column 132, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... on the other hand Thailand stood at top position among to 10 countries in export...
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Line 5, column 16, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'data the highest'.
Suggestion: data the highest
...s in exporting fishes Asia's to data highest position in fishers number counted as 2...
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Line 5, column 425, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hat was below the 1 million in same year Moving toward the exporters of fish in 2...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, so, whereas, while, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 33.7804878049 112% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 904.0 965.302439024 94% => OK
No of words: 194.0 196.424390244 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.65979381443 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39308530235 2.65546596893 90% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 106.607317073 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567010309278 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 261.9 283.868780488 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 8.94146341463 11% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 194.0 22.4926829268 863% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 43.030603864 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 904.0 112.824112599 801% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 194.0 22.9334400587 846% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 48.0 5.23603664747 917% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225927928437 0.215688989381 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.225927928437 0.103423049105 218% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0843802449381 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127382522542 0.15604864568 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0427913647722 0.0819641961636 52% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 97.5 13.2329268293 737% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -100.05 61.2550243902 -163% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 6.51609756098 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 75.4 10.3012195122 732% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 10.93 11.4140731707 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 16.51 8.06136585366 205% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 55.0 11.4329268293 481% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 79.6 10.9970731707 724% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 55.0 11.0658536585 497% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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