TPO 51- strange behaviors of elephants
Recently, there has been a lot of debate on animal's behavior patterns. More specifically, in regard to the passage, the author puts forth the idea that elephant behavior is surprising to some extent. The speaker in the listening passage, however, stands in firm opposition to this claim. In fact, he explains that there are some serious flaws in the claim of the writer. he addresses, and explains in detail, the trouble with each of the claims made in the reading text.
First, the author states that elephants can sense their death as they seem to break away from their herd near the end of their lives. The professor refutes this rationale by stating that with age, it becomes difficult for the elephants to chew hard vegetation as their teeth wear down. As a result, they usually look for soft vegetation available near a water source.
Secondly, one group of experts, represented by the writer, believe that elephants have the artistic ability. But not all the experts from the same field believe the claim is accurate. The professor argues that the trainer generally trains the elephant hitting its ear which is very sensitive. When the elephant is hit by a similar way, it responds in a certain pattern without knowing it.
The author wraps up his argument contending that elephants are feared of mice. Not surprisingly, the speaker takes issue with this rationale by suggesting that mice are generally unknown to elephants. if mice were a known species, the elephants would not mind if they were in the vicinity or not.
In sum, both the professor and writer hold conflicting views about elephant behavior. it is clear that they will have trouble finding common ground on this issue
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 45, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'animals'' or 'animal's'?
Suggestion: animals'; animal's
...ntly, there has been a lot of debate on animals behavior patterns. More specifically, i...
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Line 1, column 372, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: He
...rious flaws in the claim of the writer. he addresses, and explains in detail, the ...
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Line 7, column 202, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: If
...ice are generally unknown to elephants. if mice were a known species, the elephant...
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Line 9, column 87, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...flicting views about elephant behavior. it is clear that they will have trouble fi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, in fact, as a result, in regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.4613686534 105% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 5.04856512141 59% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 7.30242825607 55% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 12.0772626932 91% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 22.412803532 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 30.3222958057 125% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.01324503311 80% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1420.0 1373.03311258 103% => OK
No of words: 287.0 270.72406181 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94773519164 5.08290768461 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.04702891845 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50068402302 2.5805825403 97% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 145.348785872 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585365853659 0.540411800872 108% => OK
syllable_count: 427.5 419.366225166 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 3.25607064018 184% => OK
Article: 9.0 8.23620309051 109% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.25165562914 240% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.51434878587 132% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 13.0662251656 130% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 21.2450331126 75% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 22.7583970586 49.2860985944 46% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 83.5294117647 110.228320801 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8823529412 21.698381199 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.11764705882 7.06452816374 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 4.19205298013 95% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 4.33554083885 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 4.45695364238 179% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.27373068433 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16457911596 0.272083759551 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0517370297021 0.0996497079465 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0516922860126 0.0662205650399 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0893191222421 0.162205337803 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0207449575889 0.0443174109184 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.3589403974 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 53.8541721854 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.0289183223 76% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.13 12.2367328918 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.42419426049 93% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 63.6247240618 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.7273730684 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.498013245 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.2008830022 71% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.5 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.