The pie chart illustrates average percentage of three nutrients sodium,saturated fat and added sugar in major meals if taken excessively will be harmful to the American citizens health.The unit was measured in percentage.Over all,dinner began with the highest percentage of food nutrient and ended up been the least while snack started at a low rate but ended up to be the most consumed nutrient by the Americans.
It can be seen that sodium in dinner was the most nutrient taken with 43% followed by lunch of 29% both breakfast and snacks have equal percentage of 14%.
Next is the,saturated fat its consumption reduced to 37% in dinner, lunch also experienced a drop by 3% while breakfast and snacks peaked up by 2 and 7 (%) respectively.
Then for the added sugar, dinner and lunch dipped greatly to 23% and 19%.However,breakfast has the same percentage with that of saturated fat 16%and snacks finished up been the highest consumer with 42%.
- In modern society people argue that schools become unnecessary as children can study at home via the internet Do you agree or disagree 55
- It is generally believed that the Internet it is an excellent means of communication but some people suggest that it may not be the best place to find information.Discuss both these views and give your opinion. 56
- In the last 20 years there have been significant development in the field of information technology by IT for example the world wide web and communication by email. However, future development in It are likely to have more negative effects than positive. 73
- Some people feel that it is always wrong to keep animals in captivity, for instance in zoo, other people say that there are benefits for the animals and humans . Discuss both views and give your opinion 67
- some parents buy their children whatever they ask for, and allow their children to do whatever they want. Is this a good way to raise children? What consequences could this style of parenting have for children as they get older? 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: , saturated
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'citizens'' or 'citizen's'?
Suggestion: citizens'; citizen's
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
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Suggestion: Over
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , dinner
...unit was measured in percentage.Over all,dinner began with the highest percentage of fo...
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Message: Did you forget something after 'the'?
... have equal percentage of 14%. Next is the,saturated fat its consumption reduced to...
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Suggestion: , saturated
...ve equal percentage of 14%. Next is the,saturated fat its consumption reduced to 37% in d...
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Suggestion: However
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Suggestion: , breakfast
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, then, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 788.0 965.302439024 82% => OK
No of words: 158.0 196.424390244 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98734177215 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.54539209256 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.18796588103 2.65546596893 120% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 106.607317073 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.632911392405 0.547539520022 116% => OK
syllable_count: 232.2 283.868780488 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 8.94146341463 45% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 39.0 22.4926829268 173% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 104.750596657 43.030603864 243% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 197.0 112.824112599 175% => OK
Words per sentence: 39.5 22.9334400587 172% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.75 5.23603664747 186% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 1.69756097561 530% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0822642966883 0.215688989381 38% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0450274145614 0.103423049105 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0449625529946 0.0843802449381 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0450274145614 0.15604864568 29% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0449625529946 0.0819641961636 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.8 13.2329268293 165% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.35 61.2550243902 66% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.3 10.3012195122 168% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 11.4140731707 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 8.06136585366 113% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 11.4329268293 166% => OK
gunning_fog: 17.6 10.9970731707 160% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 11.0658536585 163% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.