In today's world, global has been facing many challenges. The problem might be pollution, Terrorist attack, human trafficking, global war and many more. To reduce the problem from the globally, each nation should have to help or make good relationship between other. Some people claim that, the relationship between the nations should have strong to fight the problem. I totally agree with this statement.
For of all, the nation should have to identify which problem is the most critical or which one is least important. In the current world the terrorist attack would have the primary problem between nation. The strongest country like United States, china and India continuously fighting against this problem. The good relationship between the nation can only possible to control the terrorism inside the country. The other problem pollution, human trafficking is also possible to control if the multiple nation have a mutual understanding to help each other while they need.
The solution for the pollution could be the stabilization of green house, awareness campaign and should conduct the multi national conferences between the country with logical idea to control the global pollution problem. Similarly, Terrorist attack could control if multi national county agents are working together and take a one special action to destroy the terrorism from the nation. Likewise, other problem, human trafficking could control to provide the strong security specially in open border countries. so, the solution to the global problem different nation should have good strong relationship.
To conclude this, The global will be free from the problem when all nation strongest to weakest should be in the one common practice to fight against the problem.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, likewise, similarly, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 6.0 24.0651302605 25% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1489.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.43430656934 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59300084161 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 176.041082164 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.507299270073 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 437.4 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 9.0 2.52805611222 356% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.7732062734 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.2666666667 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2666666667 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.66666666667 7.06120827912 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.378488298846 0.244688304435 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.148076089916 0.084324248473 176% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0824426950105 0.0667982634062 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.250974210879 0.151304729494 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0946163664311 0.056905535591 166% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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