It is more important to keep your old friend than it is to make new friends.
Throughout entire life, we meet lots of different kinds of people at different period. Hence, we have both new friends and old friends, which have their own features. Personally, I believe that the benefit of keeping old friend far outweigh than making new friend. But we should also make new friend at the same time.
One important aspect of keeping old friend is that personality of old friend has been proven by time. We trust people that we believe who are reliable and earnest. We get through every circumstance with old friend. In each circumstance, we realize more about them, since we can observe their reaction toward unexpected situations and how they tackle with it. By contrast, new friends always demonstrate their best side at the beginning. What is worse is that they might get along with you because of some intentions.
Another equally important thing about keeping old friend is that it is more efficient to work or talk with your old friend. People usually talk with new friend in a polite manner as we care other’s feeling and we are afraid of offending them. Yet, it is this concern that causes inefficient communication between people. It is undeniable that we can express our idea and opinion more directly when we are familiar with the listener.
On the other hand, making new friend is still extremely significant if we want to continue with maintaining the number of our old friends. It is inevitable that the busy schedule would limit us to keep in touch with old friend. With acquainting new people, we can make up the loss of old friends. It should be also noted that new friends could bring different new stories into your life, which is a good chance to broaden our horizons. Nowadays, we have more opportunities to meet people from other countries. Hence, this trend allows to understand other culture from all over the world without going abroad.
In the light of the above-mentioned arguments. There is no denying that the advantages of keeping old friend is obvious. Moreover, making new friend can be a good method for dealing with the shortage of old friends. Other than that, protect our relationship with old friend is definitely the first priority.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider replacing "in a polite manner" with adverb for "polite"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
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Message: Did you mean 'understanding'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'allow' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: understanding
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, moreover, so, still, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 50.0 43.0788530466 116% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 52.1666666667 102% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1834.0 1977.66487455 93% => OK
No of words: 374.0 407.700716846 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90374331551 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3976220399 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61638359659 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.532085561497 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 540.0 618.680645161 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.2094499516 48.9658058833 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 76.4166666667 100.406767564 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5833333333 20.6045352989 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.79166666667 5.45110844103 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.456951114432 0.236089414692 194% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.14413012512 0.076458572812 189% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.127692194276 0.0737576698707 173% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.297117884596 0.150856017488 197% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0586702861671 0.0645574589148 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 11.7677419355 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 58.1214874552 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.1575268817 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.84 10.9000537634 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.59 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 86.8835125448 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 71.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.5 Out of 30
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