The graph below CO2 emission for different forms of transport in the European union.The pie chart shows the percentage of European union funds being spent on different forms of transport.
It is give two chart bar graph reveal that informantion about representation Co2 emission for kind forms of transport in the European union.secondly circular charts depicts the proportion of European union funds being spent on various forms of transport.
It is clearly seen that,in the chart grams of Co2 per passenger use the air then it has higher percentage on the chart.Therefore,maritime and rail are similar of 50.However,the coaches have very declined passenger use it.
on the other hand, the pie chart illustrate the percentage of European union funds of most of roads through it are fall up proportion in the chart.After that, the railways has nearly declined compare to roads.Furthermore, the public transport are only 10 porproption.lastly,five transport have very decreased funds just one to two percentage.
To sum up,most of passenger using the air transport European union.Thus,roads use in anytime as well as everywhere .it has huge proportion in the chat
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, lastly, second, secondly, then, therefore, thus, well, as well as, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 10.4138276553 10% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 832.0 1615.20841683 52% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 153.0 315.596192385 48% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.43790849673 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51700396316 4.20363070211 84% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.79252836395 2.80592935109 135% => OK
Unique words: 92.0 176.041082164 52% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.601307189542 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 249.3 506.74238477 49% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 38.0 20.2975951904 187% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 69.341545988 49.4020404114 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 208.0 106.682146367 195% => OK
Words per sentence: 38.25 20.7667163134 184% => OK
Discourse Markers: 29.25 7.06120827912 414% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 5.01903807615 359% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.417086343455 0.244688304435 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.244549684531 0.084324248473 290% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.175151749759 0.0667982634062 262% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.244549684531 0.151304729494 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.175151749759 0.056905535591 308% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 23.3 13.0946893788 178% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.91 50.2224549098 66% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.1 11.3001002004 160% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.86 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 78.4519038076 42% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 17.2 10.1190380762 170% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 10.7795591182 167% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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