You are bored in your current job but you enjoy working for your company. You think you would be happier if you moved to a different department in the same company.Write a letter to your employer. In the letter ask to be moved to a position in another

Dear Sir,

I'm working with your organization as 'Quality Test Engineer' currently. I'm writing this letter in regard to my department change request, as I have worked with my current position for the 4-year period.

My current job is to check the quality of the products from the production department and to produce the test reports. Even though I'm very much familiar and comfortable with my work, I prefer to learn and explore new areas. I feel like doing the same process daily, which is affecting my interest rate.

I prefer to move to the production department since I'm very much interested in the development process. So, I have completed a training course to upskill myself in the area specified. I believe I will apply all my learning if I can get a chance in production work. Additionally, I have excellent experience with the testing, which I can also implement in producing. This will reduce a lot of effort usually required for the testing.

So, kindly consider my request and help with a change in my area of work as soon as possible. I'm eagerly looking forward to hearing from you.

Yours Faithfully,
Anu

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, so, i feel, in regard to

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 3.85567010309 285% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 939.0 937.175257732 100% => OK
No of words: 194.0 206.0 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84020618557 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75879158754 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 127.690721649 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.592783505155 0.622605031667 95% => OK
syllable_count: 288.9 290.88556701 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.7166559626 44.8134815571 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.2307692308 76.5299724578 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.9230769231 16.8248392259 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.07692307692 4.34317383033 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 2.54639175258 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.134621225678 0.216113520407 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0500203741296 0.0766984524023 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0453058473573 0.0603063233224 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0780893961165 0.12726935374 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0369275192501 0.0580467560999 64% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 8.37731958763 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.2 8.71597938144 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 7.59969072165 115% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 41.2886597938 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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