The table below gives information about online shopping in one year in the UK.it shows the amount of money spent on various items by men and women and the percentage for men and women and total money spent on these items.
The given table illustrates the amount of money and percentage of money spent on 10 different items by males and females who do online shopping within 12months in England. Overall,it can be seen that males have the highest online shopping and they also have the greatest percentage on markets shares even though there were periods of fluctuations between the genders
Electrical goods was the highest item bought online by men which was €826.9 in that month and it was also second to the highest in percentage of market share with 71.9%.Next,is the furniture and floor coverings which was 340.1 and was second most purchased online item by men and it's percentage was 30.8but for females it was the highest most purchased while it's percentage in market share was 69.2.Both males and females have total expenditure of €1103 over 12 months.€348.2 was spent by females buying clothing and footwear been the second highest while 176.8 was spent by men with total of 529 and the percentage was 33.7% for men and 66.3% for females.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, second, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 7.0 214% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 859.0 965.302439024 89% => OK
No of words: 173.0 196.424390244 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96531791908 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62669911048 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58008161564 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 87.0 106.607317073 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.50289017341 0.547539520022 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 247.5 283.868780488 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 2.0 8.94146341463 22% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 86.0 22.4926829268 382% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 344.0 43.030603864 799% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 429.5 112.824112599 381% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 86.5 22.9334400587 377% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 16.0 5.23603664747 306% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 1.69756097561 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232254499769 0.215688989381 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.222661983788 0.103423049105 215% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0540605580228 0.0843802449381 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.192769031188 0.15604864568 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0314716451776 0.0819641961636 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 45.2 13.2329268293 342% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 1.11 61.2550243902 2% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 6.51609756098 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 34.5 10.3012195122 335% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.73 11.4140731707 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.18 8.06136585366 126% => OK
difficult_words: 25.0 40.7170731707 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 27.0 11.4329268293 236% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 36.4 10.9970731707 331% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.