some people believe international events cause problems for the host country that is not worth holding it?
Agree or disagree?
<p class="MsoNormal"><font face="Lucida Sans Unicode, sans-serif">In this modern world, admiring the international celebrity is not a big deal. Nowadays international events are quite common which not only give us opportunity to meet our idol stars but also improves the relationship between different countries. However some people thinks that such events burdens the host countries which are no so financially strong and I completely agree with them. To list a few, traffic congestion and safety of foreign guests are the major issues that every country needs to be prepared of prior to hosting an intenational program. One of the primary problem which the </font><span style="font-family: Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 12pt;">poor countries that host international concerts is </span><span style="font-family: Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 12pt;">the safety of </span><span style="font-family: Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 12pt;">the international stars. Although, Most of </span><span style="font-family: Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 12pt;">the celebrities prefer to bring their own security staff </span><span style="font-family: Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 12pt;">but still theyare the responsibility of the visiting country thus </span><span style="font-family: Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 12pt;">their safety is matter of big concern. For an i</span><span style="font-family: Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 12pt;">nstance, Recently there was a concert of famous singer </span><span style="font-family: Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 12pt;">Nick jonas in India. He got stucked in the airport for 2 hours due to </span><span style="font-family: Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 12pt;">his die-hard fans who blocked the roads </span><span style="font-family: Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 12pt;">outside airport. such incidents donot remark a good </span><span style="font-family: Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 12pt;">image of the nation. </span><span style="font-family: Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 12pt;">Another major problem that the host countries experience while these international shows is the trafficcongestion. </span><span style="font-family: Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 12pt;">In connection to the above problem, sometimes for the safety of </span><span style="font-family: Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 12pt;">foreign guests some routes are blocked, which further </span><span style="font-family: Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 12pt;">lead to huge traffic choas. people donot make </span><span style="font-family: Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 12pt;">much benefit out of these concerts instead they experience the </span><span style="font-family: Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 12pt;">inconvenience. </span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size: 12pt; line-height: 107%; font-family: Arial, sans-serif;">In conclusion, internation shows are necessary for the better relations among different countries world wide. Unfortunately, some countries experience major problems like traffic choas and safety issues that cost them far more than the benefits.<br>
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, still, thus, while, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3773.0 1615.20841683 234% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 12.8333333333 5.12529762239 250% => Less chars per word wanted.
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 18.7935746309 2.80592935109 670% => Word_Length_SD is high.
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581632653061 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 841.5 506.74238477 166% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 2.9 1.60771543086 180% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 171.213053598 49.4020404114 347% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 314.416666667 106.682146367 295% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 24.5 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.08333333333 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 16.0 5.01903807615 319% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0411737929431 0.244688304435 17% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0479057537195 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0595934810839 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0138316450829 0.151304729494 9% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0195609068872 0.056905535591 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 51.2 13.0946893788 391% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -62.86 50.2224549098 -125% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 7.44779559118 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 28.0 11.3001002004 248% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 57.43 12.4159519038 463% => Coleman_liau_index is high.
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.93 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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