Write a letter to the local planning committee. A new swimming pool is about to be built in your town, the local planning committee wants all residents to let them know where to place the pool - in the centre of town or just outside the town. Write a letter describing the importance of the pool, the location you prefer and why, explain why the other location isn’t suitable.
To,
The Manager,
Local planning committee
Dear Sir,
On behalf of all the residents of the town, I congratulate the planning committee for setting up a new swimming pool for us. I appreciate the efforts being put by your team in other initiatives as well.
Last week, the members of the town have discussed about the concerns and have landed up on a conclusion. we would prefer that the swimming pool should be set up outside the city in the countryside area. The idea behind this suggestion is that there is already a lot of chaos in the town and moreover, due to the noise pollution in the town, we will not be feel comfortable. I would suggest that it should be set-up within 5 to 10 kilometers in the outskirts area. Perhaps, we will suggest to arrange a small van for kids visiting the pool.
I am sure that all the residents will enjoy and feel relaxed after availing this facility in the town. Once again, I congratulate the complete committee for making these facilities available for us.
Thanks and regards,
Dinesh
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- Write a letter to the local planning committee. A new swimming pool is about to be built in your town, the local planning committee wants all residents to let them know where to place the pool - in the centre of town or just outside the town. Write a lett 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 106, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: We
...rns and have landed up on a conclusion. we would prefer that the swimming pool sho...
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Line 9, column 382, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...we will not be feel comfortable. I would suggest that it should be set-up within ...
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Line 9, column 450, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'outskirts'' or 'outskirt's'?
Suggestion: outskirts'; outskirt's
...set-up within 5 to 10 kilometers in the outskirts area. Perhaps, we will suggest to arran...
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Line 9, column 483, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'suggest arranging'.
Suggestion: suggest arranging
...in the outskirts area. Perhaps, we will suggest to arrange a small van for kids visiting the pool....
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
moreover, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 32.9175257732 58% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 864.0 937.175257732 92% => OK
No of words: 183.0 206.0 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.72131147541 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6329159518 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.595628415301 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 259.2 290.88556701 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.0684339163 44.8134815571 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.4 76.5299724578 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3 16.8248392259 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.4 4.34317383033 32% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.273617924076 0.216113520407 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0926934476926 0.0766984524023 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0900181833197 0.0603063233224 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.207871171641 0.12726935374 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0892986191204 0.0580467560999 154% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 8.37731958763 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 8.71597938144 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.81 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.