Your daughter wants to study English at a language school in the town of Weymouth next year.
Write a letter to the school. In your letter
Ask for information about the course
Explain that your daughter is interested in social events
Find out what accommodation is available
Dear sir,
I am writing to enquire about English language course which my daughter, Christina Williams wants to study in Weymouth university next year.
Could you please provide a catalogue which has some basic information such as the course duration and guidelines because I would like to know if it is a 2-year course and the in-depth knowledge.
Clearly, she has been keen on participating in social events since her formative years, and as a result she always joins groups such as the Humanitarians and the Red Cross. For this reason, I believe she would like to become a member of a social group if available in the institution.
Could you please give some information about the kind of accommodation that is available in the school premises ? is it a hostel apartment or a studio apartment? more so, is it well equipped with adequate facilities?
I look forward to hearing from you
Yours faithfully,
Darren Williams
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Is
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Suggestion: More
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so, well, kind of, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 32.9175257732 55% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 786.0 937.175257732 84% => OK
No of words: 156.0 206.0 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03846153846 4.54256449028 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53411884305 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86314057253 2.54303337028 113% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 127.690721649 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.666666666667 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 239.4 290.88556701 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.4125471067 44.8134815571 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.25 76.5299724578 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5 16.8248392259 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.125 4.34317383033 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186827082307 0.216113520407 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0644683296918 0.0766984524023 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0698254028399 0.0603063233224 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.076465868844 0.12726935374 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0842424170859 0.0580467560999 145% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 8.37731958763 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 8.71597938144 137% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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