Rich countries often give money to poorer countries, but it does not solve poverty. Therefore, developed countries should give other types of help to the poor countries rather than financial aid.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Donating the weaker countries by an economically powered doesn't eradicate the solution regarding food less ness, so those nations should help them in other factors and make dependent themselves. In my opinion, I agree that they should help them to conduct research to find out their weakness and solve those problems, also it helps to maximize their self-dependent level from employment, technologies, and education status.
Though, The poverty is a most common problem in the globe, lots of individual are facing such problem. So, The financial aid might be the quick stash but in long it won't be effective, providing help to find their weakness by conducting the different kind of researches program in those fields helps to boost them up. These days there are lots of organization who are working for such nations UN(United Nation), and many other INGOS are helping in such field, but research may take
huge time to give a sustainable solution.In this case, Initial financial support could be the solution, as well as those research helps to find what is the root cause for the poverty.The effective research can eliminate those factor and kick those problems far away.
Also, Those countries which have the poverty has some common factors in raise like unemployment, lack of education,and technologies they use. If we support them economically than they don't try to improve themselves, so giving helps to improve literacy rate, improving the technological power and creating the jobs within their priories enhance their ability to earn something. These factors are a key to maximize their economic status and leads them a step ahead from where they are. For-example, Nepal even have poverty so with help of UN and INGOS it's boosting itself form the different level and reduction such ratios than earlier.
In conclusion, Helping them financially is not a solution to reduce the poverty but effective research and finding root cause helps to mitigate it, even aiding them for education, technologies, and employment creation can reduce their poverty rate.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, regarding, so, well, in conclusion, kind of, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1735.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 333.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21021021021 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74905530188 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582582582583 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 534.6 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 20.2975951904 163% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 90.2984495991 49.4020404114 183% => OK
Chars per sentence: 173.5 106.682146367 163% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.3 20.7667163134 160% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.135960511904 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0544855356029 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0331659179798 0.0667982634062 50% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0790822319953 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0256307844232 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.8 13.0946893788 151% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.98 50.2224549098 76% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 11.3001002004 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.53 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.16 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.1190380762 150% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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