Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? In the past, it was easier to identify what type of career job would lead to a secure, successful future. (TPO39-Task2)
One of the most obvious ways in which one can ensure a decent standard of living and relatively prosperous life is obtaining a kind of job that is going to be providing enough income and be stable sufficiently at the same time. Without such a career, it depends on chance or some exceptional talents that one might possess, to earn a sufficient living. Some people think that in the past, it was not difficult to identify what type of job would secure your future success. In my point of view, people are capable of being familiar with jobs better nowadays than past for some advantageous which I will explore in the following essay.
To begin with, the internet has made a massive data source for us. People can simply search for a particular job on the internet and download much information about the job, while people in the past did not gain access to the internet. For example, if you would like to find out what skills computer science should have or how much salary he or she receives, with one click you can search it on google, even obtain answers of questions that you did not ask.
In addition, people have experience in a job can be discovered everywhere. Due to the increase of population, most of the jobs have been tried out by some people, so you can always find someone that has experience in your intended field, while people in past lived in small groups, and most of them had experience in the small number of fields of work.
Last but not least, people are educating in universities to become professional in jobs that current world needs. People can study different subjects to indicate their favorite field of study based on their majors before choosing a career, while people in the past did not study academically, so their choice was more based on experience rather than wisdom or knowledge.
In sum, I believe that in this day and age it is tremendously easy to predict what kind of profession will result in a bright future for one. Not only do find jobs to fit you quickly that gets you plenty of money, but also get many of the available jobs that they will bring about a successful life. Moreover, experienced people can help us in a particular job that we intend to apply it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, while, for example, in addition, kind of, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 68.0 52.1666666667 130% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1820.0 1977.66487455 92% => OK
No of words: 397.0 407.700716846 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.58438287154 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46372701284 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49234881698 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 212.727598566 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.541561712846 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 574.2 618.680645161 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.1344086022 139% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 64.3536545749 48.9658058833 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.0 100.406767564 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.3571428571 20.6045352989 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.45110844103 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199932580339 0.236089414692 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0739709523043 0.076458572812 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0691766036095 0.0737576698707 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107901568489 0.150856017488 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.045136120585 0.0645574589148 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 11.7677419355 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.98 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.8 10.1575268817 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.58 10.9000537634 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 86.8835125448 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.0537634409 131% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.5 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.