The people who live in present era enjoy better living than previous era.?
Whats your opinion and discuss both the views.
The previous era is so different from the present time. Both the periods have their own culture and authenticity. But I firmly believe that the today's time is somehow have a better living and lifestyle than the old period.
In the past years, the standard of living of the people have been very low and the education level also not as much good enough to experience and explore different areas of knowledge. The developments happened years ago has been very challenging and needs a lot of improvements. The people are not aware about so many things and they are not open-minded to accept the new things easily. Farming are considered as most suitable form of earning and going to other professions had lower interest rates. The traditional form of transport used such as bullock carts. Furthermore, the way of communication is posting letters and waiting too long to get replies, it takes so much time and effort to complete the process. Additionally, the hospitals and medical facilities are very poor and have been difficult to reach from the villages conveniently. The literacy and birth rate are considerably less than expected.
On the other hand, In present situation the technology has been advanced and have a high level of intelligence added up to the so much information and knowledge. The graph of living is better than past, people have high incomes and expectations for adopting new ways to live. However, the highly equipped medical cares and educational institutions make positive impact over literacy rates and health of public. The people get more concerned about their rights and having a confidence to make decisions about what they want. The form of communication now has been occupied by the phones, emails and video calls. The employment opportunities have unexpectedly growing up in the form of choosing number of skills. Moreover, it is required to focus on the issues which has been made up in next couple of years.
In conclusion, I support the statement that the present era is more powerful and versatile than last era, but we have also seen that the certain problems also occur in the today's world, which had not been appeared decade ago. SO we have to take action for solving it and improving it to make better future.
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| 2019-05-24 | Mishika sugandhi | 73 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 612, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... by the phones, emails and video calls. The employment opportunities have unexpecte...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, then, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 10.4138276553 221% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1877.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 381.0 315.596192385 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92650918635 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41805628031 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73779828248 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.538057742782 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 597.6 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 13.0 2.52805611222 514% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.5430370331 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.85 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.05 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.9 7.06120827912 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183598601335 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0515710526303 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0696794971901 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129505809388 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0608853568698 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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