People have little understanding of the importance of the natural world. What are the reasons for this, and how can people learn more about the natural world?
In a globalized world, humans are prone to undervalue the significance of the natural world. however, it may be a contributor to the marginalization of the role of the natural environment on a regular basis. some explanations will be put forward before solutions can be proposed to have citizens acquire more knowledge about the natural world.
people neglecting the enormous value of the natural world can be ascribed to a host of reasons. First, in reality, citizens are usually swept into the maelstrom of work, as their residence as well as offices are in geographical proximity to metropolises and surrounded by state-of-the-art gadgets. however, the more bowdlerizing and high-tech human’s standard of living becomes, the more they switch to withdraw from the nature. In the long run, several problems such as air quality’s degradation and ozone depletion may garner less attention due to a dearth of people’">people’s knowledge about the natural world. Another significant reason is that educational programs are laying considerable emphasis on core subjects such as Marxist philosophy, in a sense that they provide students with a sound theoretical than practical basis for their later study. For example, in Vietnam, students have received knowledge from lecturers in a passive way, which means children are stripped of the opportunity to promote their self-study, the main culprit of cognitive deterioration. In the long term, a multitude of activity and lessons relating to the natural world would be inevitably marginalized, regardless of intrinsic value they brings.
however, several measures can be prompted to create people’">people’s heightened awareness about the natural world. A viable resolution is to incentivize students to engage in organization about environmental issues or frequent a visit with the aim of recognizing the indispensable part of the nature to our lives. Besides, nowadays, citizens in urban areas are often fully absorbing in the mass media, which has proven to be an effective way of transmitting data about the natural beauty and its fundamental role. The facilitation of conveying this type of information via films, TV programs acts as a precursor to the substantial acquisition of people’">people’s knowledge. For example, Discovery Channel, with the manipulation of photographic images and banners that disseminates a flow of information relating to the natural world, attract millions of subscribers. Therefore, these types of information should be widely publicized in places to draw citizens' attention
In conclusion, although there are legitimate reasons as to why people eschew having a wealth of knowledge about the natural world in favor of the absorption in hectic pace of life. some feasible solutions, namely promoting the use of mass media and encouraging children to participate in non-profit organizations, produce more sustainable effects in today’s world. it is anticipated that more people will consider the natural world as a pivotal role in their daily lives in the future
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, however, if, may, so, therefore, well, as to, for example, in conclusion, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 81.0 41.998997996 193% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2640.0 1615.20841683 163% => OK
No of words: 468.0 315.596192385 148% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.64102564103 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.65116196802 4.20363070211 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.93138470101 2.80592935109 140% => OK
Unique words: 258.0 176.041082164 147% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.551282051282 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 842.4 506.74238477 166% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 50.6174529506 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 146.666666667 106.682146367 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0 20.7667163134 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 8.67935871743 184% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.389836475059 0.244688304435 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.132665552113 0.084324248473 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0856131241624 0.0667982634062 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.270827396767 0.151304729494 179% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0335416729071 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.1 13.0946893788 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 28.17 50.2224549098 56% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.73 12.4159519038 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.26 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 158.0 78.4519038076 201% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.