Problems related to the upbringing of children has been face commonly across the world, as people married at their early ages. Because of which, parents are unable to take proper care of their children. That's why, it is essential for parents that they should take child care training courses. This essay will discuss that why these courses are mandatory for all mothers and fathers.
Childcare-training-courses: are mandatory, for all parents to take proper care of their children. It is because, the boys and girls get married at the age of either in 20s or in 22s.Yet, they are not ready for it, but still they married because of the pressure of their parents and become mother at the young age. Neither, they know about their responsibility or nor how to manage family and babies. That is why, in this current period it is crucial for parents that they learn about the child-care while getting training about it in the centres. Which results toward the benefit of the kids. Thus, parents can make their children more creative and multi talented as well.
Furthermore, now-a-days parents have the lack of knowledge about the upbringing of the children. This is because, technology divert the mind of people from positive to its opposite. For example, if any person disturb anyone while using the mobile phone then they reveal their aggression to them quickly. It is same with the case in childcare. Recent survey depicts that 35% babies are victim of disorder and disability, it is because they could not receive proper care from their parents. So, parents should take childcare-training-courses, if they want to preserve their children from these problems.
To end with, for the better upbringing of children the parents should take child care training courses. which assists to make child more creative as well as multi talented.
- Nowadays, many families have bothparents working. Some working parents believe otherfamily members like grandparents can take care of their children, while others think childcare centres provide the best care.Discuss both views and give your own opinion. 56
- Caring for children is probably the most important thing of the society. It is suggested that all mothers and fathers should be required to take the childcare training courses. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement? 59
- Nowadays, many families have bothparents working. Some working parents believe otherfamily members like grandparents can take care of their children, while others think childcare centres provide the best care.Discuss both views and give your own opinion. 56
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, so, still, then, thus, well, while, for example, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1538.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04262295082 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93145558949 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.514754098361 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 457.2 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.6702457147 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.4444444444 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9444444444 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 7.06120827912 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201450356025 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0810859275317 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0932437253934 0.0667982634062 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156958341575 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.036199743992 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.69 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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