The recent popularity of online shopping will result in the end of high street shops.To wt extend do you agree or disagree.
It is undeniably true, that over the past few years, online shopping has become the most popular method for purchasing goods Looking at the current trend , few people claim that high street shops will soon be a history as they will be taken over by e-commerce. I completely disagree with this argument ,as shops are essential for many reasons.
To begin with, people who want to invest a lucrative amount in buying any product prefers to visit a shop ,and check for the quality of the product before taking any bold step. For example, if a person wants to buy a home theatre of Sony company ,which can cost him or her an arm and a leg , he or she will certainly go to the electronic shop and check for the sound and clarity of voice. This will not only help them to take a wise decision about their investment ,but also give them a sense of satisfaction of getting the product which is value for money. On the contrary, online shopping takes away people’s freedom on analysing the product in detail. This certainly shows that, stores are here to stay as people still think twice before buying any goods.
Moreover, stores act as a rescuer in case of emergencies. We all have gone through some situations in life when we had to buy things on an urgent basis . At that point of time, stores play a significant role because we can directly go to the shop, do shopping and immediately take goods with us. However, this is not the case while web shopping as delivery time is over two three days.Thus stores are convenient options in dire emergencies.
In conclusion , even though brick and mortar shops are no longer famous as compared to the past , they still hold their importance when it comes to buying vital things as well as in urgent scenarios.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, moreover, so, still, thus, well, while, for example, in conclusion, as well as, on the contrary, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1446.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.6050955414 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44157766228 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.614649681529 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 446.4 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.8414979828 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.5 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.1666666667 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.6666666667 7.06120827912 165% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.128727182478 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.043983833586 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0472702085208 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0770889293782 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0530887320817 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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