Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people however think that other types of progress are equally important for a country discuss both these views and give your opinion
Most of the governments consider the financial growth of the country to make it prosper. While it is also thought that along with growing a strong economic status other developmental strategies are also important. In my opinion, I think it is the economy that should be first taken into account in dealing with country affairs successfully.
To start with, countries with a strong economy are said to be developed. Such countries can deal with any issue by themselves that is, without taking aid from other countries. For example, the United States of America, one of the most advanced nation, if face any disaster like storms, or horrible fires in the forests of California, they have many expensive types of machinery to combat these difficult situations. They have the ability to buy such costly items as they have a strong financial status. Moreover, a strong economy means a strong defense. With the help of money, nations strengthen their defending capability by purchasing and inventing powerful weapons. Therefore, the enemies do not try to harm that country.
On the other hand, people argue that other matters should also be taken into consideration, but is it possible to overcome other progression work without having a stable economy? I think it is only possible by taking financial help from developed countries or the IMF. For instance, Pakistan nowadays facing severe economic retardation so it has to depend on loans to cope with the country’s internal affairs. As a result, the currency value is getting low and also other progression works like building power plants and dams are also affected.
In conclusion, the strong economy makes a country stable and achieve its targets. Other forms of progression will only be possible if there is enough finance to back it up. Otherwise, the state will be dependent on loans.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 90, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...owth of the country to make it prosper. While it is also thought that along with grow...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, so, then, therefore, while, as to, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion, to start with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1542.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08910891089 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75964827389 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.580858085809 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 486.9 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.3575080005 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.7058823529 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8235294118 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4705882353 7.06120827912 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182644259646 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0534219016946 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0399508728042 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112976018471 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0424380271685 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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