You recently bought a piece of equipment for your kitchen but it did not work. You phoned the shop but no action was taken.
Write a letter to the shop manager. In your letter:
describe the problem with the equipment
explain what happened when you phoned the shop
say what you would like the manager to do
Write at least 150 words.
You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to report a few problems with the mixer grinder that I bought from your store last Thursday. It is a ‘Butterfly’ mixer grinder of white colour. The main problem is that the grinder does not work at) level 3 which is its top speed. While testing the product in the shop, I did not test it in all 3 speed levels, but once we started using it in real time we found the defect. Another problem is that the smallest jar does not close properly and because of this the content of the jar spills out.
When I contacted your customer service I did not receive any proper response and finally after many follow up calls they promised to send a technician to rectify this issue, but unfortunately he has not arrived till now. This caused inconvenience to my family because we have not been able to use the product for the last one week.
I would request you to send a technician as early as possible, since it is so urgent for my family. If the problem is with the manufacturer, I would request you to replace this one with a defect-free product.
Thank you for your valuable time. I look forward to receiving your reply.
Yours Sincerely
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 113, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ht from your store last Thursday. It is a 'Butterfly' mixer grinder of ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, if, look, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 978.0 937.175257732 104% => OK
No of words: 217.0 206.0 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.5069124424 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8380880478 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6500300413 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 127.690721649 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.612903225806 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 297.9 290.88556701 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.6631723524 44.8134815571 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.5 76.5299724578 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0833333333 16.8248392259 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.75 4.34317383033 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 1.49484536082 468% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20454093184 0.216113520407 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0768482663296 0.0766984524023 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0592986139959 0.0603063233224 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12732048973 0.12726935374 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0547526287537 0.0580467560999 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 8.37731958763 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.58 8.71597938144 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.29 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.