People are living in a 'throwaway society', using things for a short time and then throwing them away.
What are the causes of this?
What problems does it lead to?
Indeed, we are living in a society which relies on use and throw method. It is believed that more and more people are indulging themselves for it because it is cheap. Also, people, these days are in trend to follow each other which makes throwing away any product common. There can be several causes for accepting such trend in socities but we will be discussing a few and highlight the problems it can create if we uninterruptedly doing it.
The customers are using use and throw products because of their availability in market and they are inexpensive. This makes them to use the cheap product for a shorter time and once it is incapacitated they can throw it. Furthermore, it gives you the power to use a variety of things in shorter span of time which is great if you will bore by using the same items for a longer duration. For example, use and throw pen are cheaper and write much more by comparing it with the gel pen and their refills. China is the biggest player to manufacture these articles due to its low-cost production rate.
However, it is good to use a reasonable price product but Do you think it is good for the environment? If we are using low market materials for producing these commodities they will release more chemical in our surroundings which will have direct impact on our health. Moreover, they will need more resources to recycle because they will be condemn in a shorter time. It will create a gigantic amount of waste which will need more dumping landfills. It was published in the Times of India that certain organization is trying to sell cheap spurious smart watches, they are made of cheap plastic and can cause cancer on exposure to the skin for a few months.
In conclusion, We all know that maintaining the standard in society is significant by buying distinct watches, shoes, and clothes, etc. but is it necessary to buy at lowered and cheap quality, that day is not far when we will start taking precautions with these articles as we are doing with plastic polythenes. Buy Eco-friendly and save the environment.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, then, for example, in conclusion, in short
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 13.1623246493 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 24.0651302605 191% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1702.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 363.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.68870523416 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3649236973 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65280531025 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.509641873278 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 532.8 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.8272936173 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.117647059 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3529411765 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.47058823529 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165425641017 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0592692334522 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0517289980184 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10117090603 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.063884256322 0.056905535591 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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