The diagrams below show the life cycle of a species of large fish called the salmon.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The ecozone diagrams illustrate salmon's life as well as the eating habit.
It can be clearly seen that there are three steps to describe the entire life span of salmons. Overall, the living places for salmons are several.
In the beginning, the salmon eggs are planted under the reeds with a lot of wee stone on the upper river, where is a slow moving speed. after five to six months, the fry salmons, around 3 to 8 cm, born and move to the lower river, where is the next place for their growth with a fast flowing to adapt the faster speed.
4 years later, the status of salmons is changed from fry to smelt, grow between 12 to 15 cm. At the moment, salmons are able to survive in the open sea. And finally, they will become adult salmon after 5 years with a 70 to 76cm body length, which is the 10 times with their birth length.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 137, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: After
...er river, where is a slow moving speed. after five to six months, the fry salmons, ar...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 675.0 965.302439024 70% => OK
No of words: 159.0 196.424390244 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.24528301887 4.92477711251 86% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55098862472 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 1.98445363961 2.65546596893 75% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 106.607317073 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.666666666667 0.547539520022 122% => OK
syllable_count: 198.0 283.868780488 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.45097560976 83% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.7821732321 43.030603864 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.375 112.824112599 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.875 22.9334400587 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.625 5.23603664747 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.106115923639 0.215688989381 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0508751902235 0.103423049105 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0350295773382 0.0843802449381 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0741603070308 0.15604864568 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0371279099741 0.0819641961636 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 13.2329268293 64% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 86.03 61.2550243902 140% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 10.3012195122 58% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.37 11.4140731707 65% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.46 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 40.7170731707 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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