Some people believe that sports are a key element in our society, while others argue that it’s just a recreational activity to be done in one’s free time. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
There is a growing controversy over the activity should be operated in the people’s free time. Most of people believe in that sports must be priority while the others consist on that having pleasure activities is better. I am personally of this idea that sports are of high importance. In this article the polarized opinions will be briefly interpreted.
There is a wide range of operations that could be operated when people are willing to spend their free time. This could boost the mental wellness rates in one society. in fact, the rate of mental disease such as depression decrease. In addition, recreational activities may have a positive impact on the young people’s manners if the government desire to reduce the crime statistics. These effect reveal when pleasure activities are chosen for free time.
Pastime is a crucial factor for a generation, although sports are a critical operation which should implicit in a society. if there were no physical activities, amount of significant diseases would be appeared. A case in point, settlement causes obesity albeit have a diet. Because of this, array of people who are overweight face some bodies difficulties like heart attack. Furthermore, people could answer both pleasure and fitness by acting physically. Thus, these reasons clear that why playing sport are desired by most of people.
By and large, there is an array of people who has this idea that sports must be important, whereas, doing recreational activities done in pleasure time is supported by the others. Nevertheless, it is very vital to have a pleasure period, having in shape and healthy body obtained by sports is outweighed.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
briefly, furthermore, if, may, nevertheless, so, thus, well, whereas, while, in addition, in fact, such as, by and large
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1399.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16236162362 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8386722621 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.586715867159 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 446.4 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.9756680694 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.2941176471 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9411764706 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.05882352941 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.29094784758 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0839671754892 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0704919262917 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178926533388 0.151304729494 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0705258997034 0.056905535591 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.35 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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