An Art in any form is enjoyable. The people who are artistic do not see art as a profession but as passion. In my opinion a film, a novel or a poem gives credit to full of its value only when it is understandable to most of the people.
Firstly, art in any form is appreciated and enjoyed when the audience, who are on the receiving side of the art, understand it. The understanding of anything enhances the beauty of it. As most of the art is made up for the masses and for earning money, they need to understand the purpose of it. The emotions of the author should reach the one at the receiving end.
Secondly, when the things are understandable by masses it verifies its credibility because people approve of the things they like. For example, even the elections take place with the consideration of masses to elect the President. In whole of the world democracy is appreciated only because it involves the role of masses. Another example, is of the T.V. show "Friends" which is loved by the masses and has proven its merit all over the world.
However, the art is not only made for commercial purposes, sometimes it involves lot of true emotions. For example, even though modern art is not understandable by majority of people, still it has a value. So that is one example in which even though art is not understandable by many people because there are majority of them who think differently and are ready for something out-of-the-box.These people appreciate the work because they are hungry for it and these kinds of art placate their hunger. The examples of many artistic forms are present that are just fabulous but were not approved by the masses because maybe they were ahead of the time.
In conclusion, I want to say that an art in any form gives pleasure to our senses whether it is eyes or ears. An art appreciated by many people has some value as there are many people who can say that the particular art has some credibility and has been made with diligence.
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- In order for any work of art—for example, a film, a novel, a poem, or a song—to have merit, it must be understandable to most people. 50
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, still, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 19.5258426966 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 12.4196629213 24% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 33.0505617978 85% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 58.6224719101 80% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 12.9106741573 23% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1645.0 2235.4752809 74% => OK
No of words: 356.0 442.535393258 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.62078651685 5.05705443957 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34372677135 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85880958811 2.79657885939 102% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 215.323595506 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.455056179775 0.4932671777 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 535.5 704.065955056 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.99550561798 160% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.9845527222 60.3974514979 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.7647058824 118.986275619 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9411764706 23.4991977007 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.41176470588 5.21951772744 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.2758426966 136% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.29112683135 0.243740707755 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0959734209894 0.0831039109588 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0806988069097 0.0758088955206 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163631539317 0.150359130593 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0683466673857 0.0667264976115 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 14.1392134831 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 48.8420337079 122% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.52 12.1639044944 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.33 8.38706741573 87% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 100.480337079 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.