Education is a lifelong task. In what extent do you agree or disagree?
education is indisputably of great importance. However, the term 'education' is obviously not constricted in years spending in schools, but it is something that accompanies individuals until the end of their life.
First of all, people need to continuously learn how to properly behave to each other. Such behaviour can be achieved through experience, which means that the longer they live, the more they gain. For example, leading a team teach them the value of responsibility or dealing with an annoying customer educates them tolerance. Moreover, observation is also an infinite way to behave in an efficient manner. As a child, we usually look and imitate our parent's behaviour while when growing up, people usually observe others to see how gentle a manager react to his staff's mistake or how romantic a couple behave to each other. By that, individual can modify their act to be a better person
Secondly, every people need to sharpen their expertise all through their life. To be more specific, if ones are satisfied with their jobs or status and desire nothing to improve, it is unlikely that these people will get promoted or go further than their current positions. This proves that education even at the late of one's life is necessary to help them upgrade the knowledge in order not to fall behind. For instance, a teacher these days needs basic skills of using technology to not only easily convey the knowledge to his students, but also to enlighten his lessons.
To summarise, education is a non-stop process throughout one's life because human is a living creature and education helps them to constantly move forward.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Education
education is indisputably of great importance. Ho...
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Line 3, column 382, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in an efficient manner" with adverb for "efficient"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...ation is also an infinite way to behave in an efficient manner. As a child, we usually look and imitat...
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Line 5, column 322, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...oves that education even at the late of ones life is necessary to help them upgrade ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, while, for example, for instance, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1367.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02573529412 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69593109 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.628676470588 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 434.7 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.1466388575 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.916666667 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6666666667 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.58333333333 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0549489060704 0.244688304435 22% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0254670393001 0.084324248473 30% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0332127845771 0.0667982634062 50% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.04852654268 0.151304729494 32% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0321747659989 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.19 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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