Nowadays online education has become popular as more institutes and companies are offering courses online. However,many people prefer traditional classroom training or study. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of both methods.
In todays rapidly growing world where some people are preferring online courses globally where some are still favoring the traditional methods for their knowledge.In this essay I'll be discussing pros and cons of both system.
Talking about online courses which is favorite among todays generations provides a range of opportunity to connect with amazingly talented experts.In addition, they update with the latest system of education. For instance, UK has added 3D graphics and laser technology in videos for their students .Though the students has sometime facilities but then also they might face problems .Firstly, they are not always in contact with their tutor.It means they have to wait till next days to discuss their queries.Secondly, language barrier could be the next problem especially their tones or ascent which might create great problems for the students to understand and can really put them in tough situation.
On other hand, there is still some people who support traditional system of education as they are physically present and are in contact with their tutor . Furthermore, they easily deal with their problems and can share their views with their professors because they have enough time along with enough time .In addition, they are always in contact with their respective teachers which adds more benefit for the learners but cannot be more effective sometime.They uses the same pen, papers and books as the source of education. I mean to say they are not updated with the latest technology which cannot be worthy for exploring their knowledge . Adding more, they have limited information and syllabus .They keep on repeating the same course without any alteration can be monotonous .
In a nutshell, both methods has their own advantages and drawbacks .It is you who have to select as per their suitability. Also which brings positive results in your education and widening your brain.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, really, second, secondly, so, still, then, for instance, i mean, in addition, talking about
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1613.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27124183007 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6327850394 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578431372549 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 489.6 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 20.2975951904 168% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 128.492109572 49.4020404114 260% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 179.222222222 106.682146367 168% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.0 20.7667163134 164% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.5555555556 7.06120827912 206% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 26.0 5.01903807615 518% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0828068959579 0.244688304435 34% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0475696530165 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0402990200964 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.069630656127 0.151304729494 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0432566049148 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.4 13.0946893788 156% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.97 50.2224549098 74% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 11.3001002004 147% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.88 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.4 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.1190380762 154% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 10.7795591182 176% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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