In today’s world, music is considered a remedy for removing barriers among individuals. So it is believed by some masses that music is an ideal way of unifying people of varying cultures and age groups. This essay will argue why music is not the only way to establish bond among people belonging to different cultures and ages as there are multifarious alternatives available to connect people.
Nowadays, there are numerous artists from all parts of the world who release their songs on websites such as Youtube to bring different audiences having varied age groups and cultures altogether on a single platform. People pursue hobbies to learn the music of different cultures and traditions. In addition, the jingles on radio stations in a country have the capability to instill a feeling of togetherness among masses. For instance, the patriotic songs of a nation inculcate a sense of unity among people belonging to different age groups and cultures. These few instances have strengthened that the music plays a pivotal role in collaborating people from different age groups and traditions.
Although music is regarded as the best way to establish relations among people, there are several other ways to connect individuals belonging to varied cultures and age groups. The introduction of social media platforms such as Facebook and WhatsApp inculcates a sense of togetherness among people belonging to different cultures and age groups. Public Events such as Book fairs and exhibitions of varied arts and sculptures organized by various associations throughout the year brings many people altogether to a single place for their favorite books and artistry works. It is observed that people who use different chat applications and explore multiple places of the world tend to be found friendlier than the people who stay in one place. Overall, there are a variety of ways available to connect people of different age groups and cultures altogether.
This essay argued that people who believe that music is the best way in order to connect people belonging to varied cultures and age groups should think of other alternatives such as book fairs and arts events. In my opinion, although music has the potential to establish relations among people, there are many other ways such as social media and public events for constructing friendships among masses who belong to different ages and diversity levels.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, still, then, for instance, in addition, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2034.0 1615.20841683 126% => OK
No of words: 388.0 315.596192385 123% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24226804124 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43821085614 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78966481499 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.448453608247 0.561755894193 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 638.1 506.74238477 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 48.9637507641 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.6 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8666666667 20.7667163134 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.66666666667 7.06120827912 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.324868449742 0.244688304435 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.141914175167 0.084324248473 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0753323686237 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.238356110164 0.151304729494 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0284389339333 0.056905535591 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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