Nowadays food has become easier to prepare. Has this change improved the way people live?
Give reasons for your answer using your own ideas and experience.
Food preparation is a big task, especially when we have little time to cook. However, these days it is easy to make our eatable with the help of ready to eat products. The processed food manufactured by food industries is prepared food or easy to cook. This trend is impacting our daily life in many ways, which will be discussed in the following paragraphs.
Firstly, the use of manufactured food from industries is the time-saving step in this modern world and it benefits various individuals who live out of home in urban regions. The majority of the items are coming on the market in prepared form thus people have to add the mixture and cook, therefore saving a kitchen time from raw product preparation. Hence, this time can be utilized in other activities. In addition to that, people who are not aware of food preparation can also make their own food with the guidance of company packed foods.
Secondly, the excessive eating of such easy to cook prepared products can lead to various side effects on our health system. Consuming these products lacks vital nutrients which makes the body sensitive to infections, thus increasing the life hurdles. In addition to that, these products carry preservatives like monosodium glutamate, which also have adverse effects on the individual’s brain system. From the survey, conducted by the nutritional department around 70 per cent of youth are sensitive to infections because of a routine habit of eating pre-cooked foods.
In conclusion, it is irrefutable that, food preparation is not a difficult task today with the help of food industries as they provide ready-made products for cooking. Although, the adverse impact on health care should not neglect by the authorities.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1451.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09122807018 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86974646132 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.561403508772 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 454.5 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.5500199954 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.642857143 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3571428571 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.64285714286 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0989870285079 0.244688304435 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0361287186366 0.084324248473 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0401359905927 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0644925010751 0.151304729494 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0440218940637 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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