You work for an international company and saw a training advert which will boost your job perform
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to express my interest in a training course " The advance Visual Basics & Web Technologies" . I saw the advertisement in the "Daily Times " newspapers of 13th June , 2019 and the course is scheduled to start on Monday 25th October,2019. The course will run for a duration of six months .
I am requesting that you should please allow me to close early every Tuesdays and Thursdays ,as the classes will commence by 4.00pm, and possible I would like to close around 3pm so I can get to the class on time as it is about 40 minutes drive from work
Needless to say, the course will greatly enhance my work as a Web Engineer, because the course is focussing on the new technologies that abounds in the web world. It also includes a course which will enable me design a more dynamic website and incorporate a lot of e-commerce technologies.
I hope my request will be favourably considered.
Yours faithfully,
Janet Brown.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 115, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...e Visual Basics & Web Technologies' . I saw the advertisement in the 'Da...
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Line 3, column 193, Rule ID: COMMA_MONTH_DATE[1]
Message: The comma is probably incorrect: 'June 2019'.
Suggestion: June 2019
...s;Daily Times ' newspapers of 13th June , 2019 and the course is scheduled to start on...
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Line 3, column 197, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ily Times ' newspapers of 13th June , 2019 and the course is scheduled to sta...
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Line 3, column 257, Rule ID: COMMA_MONTH_DATE[1]
Message: The comma is probably incorrect: 'October 2019'.
Suggestion: October 2019
...se is scheduled to start on Monday 25th October,2019. The course will run for a duration of ...
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Line 3, column 319, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...se will run for a duration of six months . I am requesting that you should plea...
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Line 5, column 92, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...close early every Tuesdays and Thursdays ,as the classes will commence by 4.00pm, ...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 32.9175257732 52% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 816.0 937.175257732 87% => OK
No of words: 169.0 206.0 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82840236686 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60555127546 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97795030936 2.54303337028 117% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 127.690721649 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.680473372781 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 245.7 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 16.3608247423 147% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 123.480974326 44.8134815571 276% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 116.571428571 76.5299724578 152% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1428571429 16.8248392259 143% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.14285714286 4.34317383033 26% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.142245138392 0.216113520407 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0650162576747 0.0766984524023 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0275865433253 0.0603063233224 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0706160032484 0.12726935374 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0126119458913 0.0580467560999 22% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 8.37731958763 160% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 70.7449484536 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 7.45979381443 154% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.03 8.71597938144 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 7.59969072165 115% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 8.54432989691 136% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.