Why do I not have a special achievement
WHY I DO NOT HAVE A SPECIAL ACHIEVEMENT
I am an arrogant child! In grade 10 and 11, I was very proud of the activities I participated in as well as the achievements: the best student at the school level, joined a non-profit organization, the leader of a club academic. However, there is a fact that I saw my achievements as a soft mattress that made me fall asleep on victory and neglect my senior year study. That led me to the end of the school year with a fairly low GPA and a fairly good academic performance, I was almost a white-handed and lost compared to other competitors when I applied to the school. I say "almost" because excessive arrogance is a flaw but in it is a few assets that I still hold, that is the progressive nature of an arrogant child. That progression helps me to face my weakness directly and realize that I cannot remain on the spot when others are progressing.
The first thing I decided to challenge myself was to get an IELTS certificate with the level that the school required and I succeeded after 2 months of seriously reviewing. After I have the IELTS results, I have determined what I need to do right away to be able to compete with other elite students: must grasp every opportunity I have. The opportunity that I mention is this essay. I am really impressed with the extremely diverse enrollment method of the University of Economics and Law, not only creating an opportunity for students to enroll, I find that the method of admission by essay is recruitment method. Modern students that most major universities in the world advocate. Students' abilities are not only judged on the balance of scores but also in how students express their personalities, aspirations, and egos through personal essays - this creates more conditions for them. What achievements have I made to express my wish to enter this dream school.
My dream is not only to become a successful entrepreneur, a good manager, but also to deal with jobs for many workers. I had the opportunity to participate in a non-profit organization (NGO), to learn from potential and young leaders, who, despite their limited economic potential, built and operate projects that affect the community. After participating in extracurricular activities, I was trained in language skills such as communication, negotiation, presentation, critical thinking, especially with flexibility and economic passion, I believe that high quality Business Administration major in English is your first choice.
Through research, I learned business management at Law University, students will be equipped with general knowledge in the fields of basic science and specialized in business administration to help them think logical system, possible the ability to transfer knowledge into professional skills, personal qualities. In addition, the selection of high quality programs in English is also an opportunity for me to access modern teaching methods, improve my language ability, in which English is a language international, most popular use in the world. About learning opportunities, after studying thoroughly about the school, the University of Economics - Law has a dynamic student environment. As the first university in the country, there is a financial market simulation room for research and teaching. In addition to studying in an international environment, students also have the opportunity to explore and study in other countries according to scholarship packages and student exchange programs and cultural exchanges. It is the depth of the subject and valuable learning opportunities that will help students improve their knowledge and meet the high demands from employers.
I believe that the opportunity to study at school with the ability and passion of economics, foreign trade will be the driving force and the stepping stone for the future, so that I can confidently affirm my position and responsibility. in his field. I want to get closer to the needs of society, embark on a project that not only creates profits for businesses but also contributes to society, not only changing the small mindset of myself, but also voice the orientation for the next generation of Business Administration.
With all of the above, I hope to be recruited to the University of Economics - Law, where I can prepare well for the upcoming University years.
Please respect and look forward to receiving your consent.
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