Many people these days have computer, laptops, telephones at their home for work. Do you think, working from home has more advantages or disadvantages? Give reasons.
Technology plays a vital role in our day to day life and at the same time it has rapid growth in modern society. Every individual wants to make their life easier by using every possible way of technology which even makes people to think that technology should lies with them each and every moment hence most of the people have computer, Laptops, Telephone etc. at their homes.
We are living in an environment wherein every other individual is involved in one or another job however along with that they do have their personal lives which tends them to believe that they can manage work from home along with their day to day household activities however there could be disadvantage at some extent as it is not feasible focusing on work along with other household tasks which might distract you from an important task or project that you are focusing on and could put their job on stake.
However, everything has an advantage and disadvantage hence in a same manner working from home gives a chance to an individual to manage their work life balance specially in case of a female employee during their maternity and once she gets married.
According to the above points that I have mentioned in regards to benefits and disadvantage of work from home, I personally feel that we are putting our jobs in risk if we continue to manage both work and household activities at the same time as this could hamper both work and personal life balance.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 61, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a same manner" with adverb for "same"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...has an advantage and disadvantage hence in a same manner working from home gives a chance to an ...
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Line 7, column 53, Rule ID: IN_REGARD_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'regarding' or 'with regard to'.
Suggestion: regarding; with regard to
... the above points that I have mentioned in regards to benefits and disadvantage of work from ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1196.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.72727272727 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43741195741 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.541501976285 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 391.5 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 42.0 20.2975951904 207% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 154.137114285 49.4020404114 312% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 199.333333333 106.682146367 187% => OK
Words per sentence: 42.1666666667 20.7667163134 203% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 3.66666666667 7.06120827912 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.357337299522 0.244688304435 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.165592284269 0.084324248473 196% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0555886270548 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.204771769954 0.151304729494 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.024358840346 0.056905535591 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.9 13.0946893788 167% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.31 50.2224549098 74% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.5 11.3001002004 164% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.04 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 78.4519038076 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 18.8 10.1190380762 186% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 10.7795591182 176% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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