These days, the amount of people who are unhappy in connected with their job is increasing. It is considered by some that accept a bad situation in work life, while there are others who claim that it is better to try to achieve an acceptable position. This essay agrees that searching for a better situation is the best idea for having a good life. This essay will discuss both points of view.
On the on hand, having a fixed job is individual willing. Some people fear that what will happen if they leave job and cannot find a better placement for handle expenses of life. Hence, many individuals satisfy with their current bad post, although never had desired it. This essay disagrees that persons have to work in unwelcome position just for this reason that they need it. Postgraduate students by low position in work place are a prime example, who work with shortage income despite high education.
On the other hand, many agree that dealing with an awful career is better than haven't it. In my honest opinion, there is a great number of individuals who expand their abilities and never give up. This type of people can progress the quality of own life and also their family. They use own potential and education to access a better chance for promotion and new experience. To them, if current job can't be a satisfaction situation in terms of salary, promotion and other features, they will leave those companies. For instance, based on a study by London university researchers, unsatisfied employee with master degree and related experience left their posts easier than others in last 5 years.
In conclusion, while the benefit of changing profession is so better for whom are unsatisfied and also it is an opportunity to find a suitable job for guarantee of future life, some still think that people should be worry of leaving work consequences, so have to accept an unfavorable job.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 80, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: haven't
...ing with an awful career is better than havent it. In my honest opinion, there is a gr...
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Line 5, column 399, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...new experience. To them, if current job cant be a satisfaction situation in terms of...
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Line 7, column 217, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'worried'?
Suggestion: worried
... some still think that people should be worry of leaving work consequences, so have t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, so, still, while, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1576.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 326.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83435582822 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57105724425 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.542944785276 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 495.9 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.612358114 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.5 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.375 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0625 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197600828192 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0666131564005 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0532617016513 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133702664466 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0611826570906 0.056905535591 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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