Some people think that a good diet and exercise are not necessary for a health and long life. To what extant do you agree or disagree?
Exercising and following a good diet is important these days, where it help us to have a healthy body and life. Some people think that diet and exercise are not required for health and long life, others believe the opposite and disagree with this idea.
On one hand, some people agree that good diet and exercise won't change and affect their life time. First, people think that they can consume any food they want, but with a specific quantity and chose the quality and type of food. Second, humans prefer not to exercise and waste their free time on sports, where they believe they can benefit from this time by making extra money at work or spend it with their families. Therefore, majority of people think that these two things are not obligatory to have a healthy and long life, where big number of people are dying from starvation. For example, people say let enjoy our lives by eating lovely foods and don't think about the impacts, since nothing will be changed. In my opinion, I disagree where people's can organize their time to exercise and know what to eat, to have a better life.
On the other hand, several people disagree with this point and think the opposite. First, good diet will help the immune system to be clean and release bacteria's from our bodies. Decrease many health problems such as obesity and heart attack, that are caused from fat and unhealthy food. Second, exercising is the most important thing that stretch our body and eliminate all the pains, that are caused from work or driving, in addition sports will build a strong, healthy and good shape body. However, people prefer to follow a good diet and exercise each day, to have a health and long life without facing any problems. For example, the last few years I had back pain and my weight increased, so I started eating healthy and exercise 4 times per week, where my life changed to a more healthy environment. For my side, I agree with this point, where people must take care of their lives and be healthy.
Finally, there is a contradiction between two type of people, some agree that good diet and exercise are not necessary for a health and long life, others disagree with this point. In my opinion, I believe to have a good life empty of pains and problems, is to be fit and eat healthy.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 72, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'helps'?
Suggestion: helps
... diet is important these days, where it help us to have a healthy body and life. Som...
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Line 3, column 89, Rule ID: LIFE_TIME[1]
Message: Did you mean 'lifetime'?
Suggestion: lifetime
...d exercise wont change and affect their life time. First, people think that they can cons...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...oy our lives by eating lovely foods and dont think about the impacts, since nothing ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, however, if, second, so, therefore, for example, in addition, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 31.0 10.4138276553 298% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 24.0651302605 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1886.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 408.0 315.596192385 129% => OK
Chars per words: 4.62254901961 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49433085973 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.16109211003 2.80592935109 77% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.475490196078 0.561755894193 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 585.9 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.4592961646 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.941176471 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.29411764706 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.402535180819 0.244688304435 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.152028168371 0.084324248473 180% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.121330143864 0.0667982634062 182% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.315132754546 0.151304729494 208% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0646901577365 0.056905535591 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 50.2224549098 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.07 8.58950901804 82% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.