In some countries people think women should have equality with men, in particular equal rights to work as police officers or serve in the army. Other think women are not suitable for such jobs.Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
It is argued by some people that in professional career women have same potential as well as men, and should get equal opportunity, where other thought that in physical strength related job like in police or in army are not suitable for them. From my point of view, everyone have same capacity and in some cases mental ability is more preferable to physical. I strongly believe that if women feel brisk about any kind of job, we should encourage them to stimulate their strength.
In our male dominated society, it is important to ensure equal chance for female in each sector. What I mean by this is that choice of work is every human being owns right. Society cannot determine what is accurate or not. In many developing countries, female struggle to attain their required position and strongly compete with male. Country like Bangladesh, for example, in garment sector there is no position for women, because they assume that women do not have cognitive or analytical power to take tough decision. Regarding that matter, it is assumable also in police force or in army. People conjecture that these activities relate with physical ability and women are not comfortable, but it is wrong perception. If man do well in nursing or tailoring profession, hence, women also do well in tough job if we impetus their path smoothly and not create discrimination about job.
On the other hand, other argues that by nature women are soft heartened so that in considering this perspective, they should explore their qualities where they sustain in long-run. Because anyone gets opportunity, but not prolong their work, at that time it impede those who is persistent about his work. For instance, girl from conservative family get chance in police and transfer to remote location. After hearing this, she quit from job which is dream job for other. Apart from this, women have responsibility to look after their family and in risky profession they have to devote their whole time, such type of public related profession. In this situation, they should enter those career where they continue in the future.
I am convinced about that some job is really tough, but if society takes decision on behalf of women is not appreciating perception. According to circumstances, women can decide what is crucial for them or not.
In conclusion, society can curb discrepancy between male and female by providing equal chance and enhance women empowerment.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
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Message: The pronoun 'anyone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'gets'.
Suggestion: gets
...hey sustain in long-run. Because anyone get opportunity, but not prolong their work...
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Message: Did you mean 'impedes'?
Suggestion: impedes
...not prolong their work, at that time it impede those who is persistent about his work....
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Suggestion:
...ofession. In this situation, they should enter those career where they continue i...
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Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
... enter those career where they continue in future. I am convinced about that some job ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, look, really, regarding, so, well, apart from, for example, for instance, i mean, in conclusion, kind of, as well as, in some cases, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 49.0 24.0651302605 204% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2037.0 1615.20841683 126% => OK
No of words: 405.0 315.596192385 128% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02962962963 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48604634366 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64524316188 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 222.0 176.041082164 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.548148148148 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 657.0 506.74238477 130% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 12.0 4.76152304609 252% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.0030584111 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.85 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.25 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.6 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267176105404 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0758082410528 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0523980927464 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146532663192 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0499872991621 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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