some people believe that it is good to share at much information as possible in scietific research, bussiness and the academic world. others believe that some information is t important or to valuabe to be shared freely.
Nowadays, the information is one of the main necessary in the life of society where to extend some knowledge about recent news or public issues in the world. Some people believe that, to share some information is the good way especially in scientific research, business and the academic world, while that the others said that the intelligence which is great importance or valuable become freely.
On the one hand, it is paramount to update about some trending issues in society because the life of people influence as the development, as we now that, the public tend to follow the popular thing. For an example, in education world such as experiment of research needed some literatures to completely their observation that shared by the people who know or have done a research similar with needed. Then in business, improving information is the main task to the businessmen who started to running in this event. As result the information that provided in the some media as television, newspaper and internet is greatest useful where it offers for some problems. In conclusion, to share information gives some benefits in community because to walking our daily life needed some information or follow the development to movement well.
On the other hand, most valuable information as the privacy in business or independent, the result of search and each other do not have to shared, because some reasons. First, when in the society show some issues that are secret in a company does not cover the possibility gives some damage in community especially to this organization. Secondly, the significant information can used by the side of untrustworthy as their advantage but as negative effect in public. In addition, it is depends on the people who want to share anything, obligatory select well thing that is suitable as public consumption.
To sum up, the developing of era encourages the people to do something new especially the issues which are growth dramatically in social media and even becoming one of the major in the life of people. In my opinion, the existence of information can improve knowledge
- Successful sports professionals can earn a great deal more money than people in other important professions. Some people think this is fully justified while others think it is unfair.Discuss both of these views and give your own opinion. 61
- The graph shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. 73
- The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 to 2011. 61
- Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that is better to try and improve such situations.Discuss both these views and vie your own opinion. 73
- Parents of obese children should not be punished for making their children fat.Do you agree or disagree? 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 562, Rule ID: THE_SOME_DAY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'same'?
Suggestion: same
...lt the information that provided in the some media as television, newspaper and inte...
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Line 2, column 611, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'is the greatest'.
Suggestion: is the greatest
...a as television, newspaper and internet is greatest useful where it offers for some problem...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, secondly, so, then, well, while, in addition, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 22.0 8.3376753507 264% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1762.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 349.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04871060172 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32221490584 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87004483073 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.501432664756 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 582.3 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 42.766186942 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.538461538 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.8461538462 20.7667163134 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5384615385 7.06120827912 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.391690387551 0.244688304435 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.134973127274 0.084324248473 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.111934357741 0.0667982634062 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.240790223829 0.151304729494 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.13350479392 0.056905535591 235% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.