The diagram below shows the life cycle of a salmon,from egg to adult fish.
summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main feature and make comparisons where relevant.
The figure is despite step by step about salmon fish life cycle,how to servious there entire life baby to adult and migrate places.
The salmon fishes come sea to river for mating and injected egg in to the river.This process called incubation.in second, step emergence process only few fish servioy and go to find fresh water for living life.
Although, river and ocean water are mixed it is called estuary.The salmon fish change living place estuary to sea and explor the sea and leaving there life in ocean.The salmon fises lived there 2/3 life part in ocean and groth after that the starting mating seasons all fishes are travel ocen to river and migrate in to the rives and start the sawning.
on the nutshell, the salmon fishes are travel so long distance in their life for surviouing and growing and continued repeted this cycle in their enteries life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, second, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 33.7804878049 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 714.0 965.302439024 74% => OK
No of words: 149.0 196.424390244 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79194630872 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.49378814695 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.17337778822 2.65546596893 82% => OK
Unique words: 84.0 106.607317073 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.563758389262 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 225.0 283.868780488 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 8.94146341463 45% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 37.0 22.4926829268 164% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 84.9452029252 43.030603864 197% => OK
Chars per sentence: 178.5 112.824112599 158% => OK
Words per sentence: 37.25 22.9334400587 162% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 5.23603664747 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180679500889 0.215688989381 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118018095499 0.103423049105 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.02094515682 0.0843802449381 25% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118018095499 0.15604864568 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.02094515682 0.0819641961636 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.8 13.2329268293 150% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.38 61.2550243902 69% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.5 10.3012195122 160% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.09 11.4140731707 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.82 8.06136585366 122% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 11.4329268293 149% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.8 10.9970731707 153% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 11.0658536585 154% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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