For the past year you have been a member of a local club. Now you want to discontinue your membership.
Write a letter to the club secretary.
In your letter
• state what type of membership you have and how you have paid for this
• give details of how you have benefited from the club
• explain why you want to leave
• You should write at least 150 words
Dear Sir,
My name IS ABC, I am writing this letter to inform you about the discontinuation of membership of the club.
In October 2015, I joined the gold membership. After a year, it was upgraded to Platinum, payment was made by XYZ credit card on 20th of October 2016.
The club has excellent facilities available at very nominal cost. Be it tennis court or badminton court, swimming pool, pool table, social activities etc., I enjoyed all of it. By using above mentioned games facilities, I am in better shape now, and reduced significant weight. Also, have made many friends as I participated in all social events organized by club.
Since my job role is of transferable category, I am moving to another county by the end of this month, therefore, I would like to discontinue the membership with immediate effect. I would like to take this opportunity to mention that I had wonderful experience as a paid member of the club.
I look forward to your reply and confirmation on my request.
Your sincerely
ABC
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 15, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rmation on my request. Your sincerely ABC
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 849.0 937.175257732 91% => OK
No of words: 176.0 206.0 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82386363636 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64232057368 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88237353948 2.54303337028 113% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 127.690721649 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.6875 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 266.4 290.88556701 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.616326156 44.8134815571 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.1818181818 76.5299724578 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 16.8248392259 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.63636363636 4.34317383033 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210265699135 0.216113520407 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0673168171869 0.0766984524023 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0646460059933 0.0603063233224 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10300928633 0.12726935374 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0872275399274 0.0580467560999 150% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 8.37731958763 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.38 8.71597938144 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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