Do you agree or disagree with the following statement. Parents should allow their children to make mistakes and let them learn from their own mistakes.
As we all know, children are the future of all countries in the world. Therefore, parenting is an important job for parents. However, do all parents know the best way to develop their children or not? There is an argument as to know whether letting children learn from the mistake they made is good or not. I totally agree with this statement for many reasons. Making mistakes is natural. In our life, from a little kid to a matured person, we certainly have made mistakes several times. Besides, gaining experience from the mistake is the best way to grow up, not only with a child, but also with ad...
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