Nowadays young people spend too much of their free time in shopping malls. This has negative effects on themselves and the society they live in.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
It is true that in modern time, the youth often overspend their spark time in shopping centers. People believe that this could affect in a negative way on both themselves and their society. In my opinion, there are reasons why young people tend to do so but spending too much time on shopping could lead to harmful results.
On the one hand, shopping malls are good places to relax and enjoy after a hard time studying and working. Young people come to these places to release stress, which is also a good method to balance their life. Shopping malls also contain many activities like foods, video games, and cinema which are very popular for people. In fact, youngth people consider these malls as a place to develop social networks rather than a place to spend money. Moreover, as humans behaviors have been changed due to the modernization, the increasing in centers concerned activities could be considered as a acceptable result. Not only young people but adults are also seem to go to shopping malls more often.
On the other hand, spending too much time in shopping malls
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: an
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'seemed'.
Suggestion: seemed
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, in fact, in my opinion, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 894.0 1615.20841683 55% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 187.0 315.596192385 59% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.7807486631 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69794460899 4.20363070211 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34255119736 2.80592935109 83% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 176.041082164 65% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.609625668449 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 274.5 506.74238477 54% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.1663394663 49.4020404114 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 89.4 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.2 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23767880065 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101922213595 0.084324248473 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0732558582204 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.197462169086 0.151304729494 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0836297633349 0.056905535591 147% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 78.4519038076 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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