The graph below show where people first got their news, both about world and about local events, between 1987 and 1997
The two given line charts represent where people first got their news, both about world and about local events, between 1987 and 1997. Considering the graphs, the most important difference was about the main source.People got the world news from television whereas they got the local news from the newspaper in the same period of time.
As the graph indicates ,the percentage of inhabitant , who choose the television as their main media increased slightly within the years shown , however the percentage of newspaper inhabitants decreased by 16% from 1987 to 1997.
Another points that we can figure out are , first television as second media among local news sources, had lots of fluctuation
and the percentage of inhabitants raised up from 19% to 37% in comparison with newspaper in sources of world news, which lost 5% of its users in those years.second figure is television and newspaper as first media had a sudden fall in 1989. finally just 10% of inhabitants used radio as their main media.
generally speaking, it can be informed that during mentioned decay ,people received news from television and newspaper as main and first media.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, however, if, second, so, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 964.0 965.302439024 100% => OK
No of words: 188.0 196.424390244 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12765957447 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65943850109 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 106.607317073 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585106382979 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 278.1 283.868780488 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 22.4926829268 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 95.5918697147 43.030603864 222% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 160.666666667 112.824112599 142% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.3333333333 22.9334400587 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 5.23603664747 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 13.0 1.69756097561 766% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.360941210849 0.215688989381 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.205148599035 0.103423049105 198% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.222367671701 0.0843802449381 264% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180672166119 0.15604864568 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.189207791657 0.0819641961636 231% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.4 13.2329268293 139% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.47 61.2550243902 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.3012195122 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.07 11.4140731707 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 40.7170731707 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.9970731707 131% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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