Change is the necessity of time, for civilizations growth and prosperity several perspectives are responsible and economy in the contemporary world is not an exception. A certain set of population advocate the case that economic growth is the crux to eradicate poverty from the globe, however, on the other end of the spectrum, some believe that it is the main source for devastating results in the natural environment. This essay will discuss both the views and elaborate that why economic growth is imperative for today's world.
To embark upon, firstly for industrialization and implementing several buildings for various purposes, large areas of Greenland been demolished. For instance, around seventy-five percent of natural land been destroyed by deforestation in many countries. Secondly, to keep running the economy of a country businesses depends on natural resources like air, water, vegetation and so on. There are numbers of these resources are now at the verge of extinction and many of them are contaminated by the lethal byproducts from the factories waste. Certainly, stress on the natural resources for the purpose of gaining economy creating an inevitable situation of probable natural disasters.
On the contrary, poverty is the main issue that every country is suffering, according to the authorities and councils economic development can deal with this problem. According to an empirical survey conducted by Queen's University, London, industrialization provides around sixty percent of job opportunities for people which ultimately improved their living standard. Apart from this, by introducing several new policies in areas of working culture, providing advanced machinery to create a final product and providing facilities helps to improve the skillsets of people to earn more. Consequently, in these reasons, financial growth can reduce poverty in countries.
In conclusion, many people believe that economic growth can reduce poverty from the world, while others have faith that it can destroy our environment. This essay demonstrated why economic development is an absolutely important part of the current world for improving the living standard of people.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 306, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'business'?
Suggestion: business
...o keep running the economy of a country businesses depends on natural resources like air, ...
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Line 7, column 300, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...mproving the living standard of people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, firstly, however, second, secondly, so, while, apart from, for instance, in conclusion, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1863.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 331.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.62839879154 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09579974318 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.564954682779 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 595.8 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.76152304609 231% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.1300832556 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.071428571 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6428571429 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.85714285714 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174094071642 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0645176334539 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0697161447693 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126854325088 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0869095539886 0.056905535591 153% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 13.0946893788 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.21 50.2224549098 62% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.67 12.4159519038 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.64 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 9.78957915832 174% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.7795591182 158% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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